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"Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth." ~V
Of the 100 people surveyed, 95% believe that students should be allowed to take their laptops home. Furthermore, the data shows that 98% of those surveyed say they would use the laptops to complete school work while at home. 78% say there was not enough time to finish class work and 56% say they have problems transferring files between their home/library and school. This result is important because even while 55% of students have a computer at home, if a student cannot access their school files, those computers are essentially worthless. With that said, Mr. Wright, an expert on computer development in I.S. 93 stated that “things went very well” when another class was given permission to take the laptops home as a test. Along those same lines, many students, according to Mr. Wright say that they “don't have Internet or Microsoft Office suite [at home].” If students were allowed to bring their laptops home, this would not be an issue.
Writing the Discussion Section:
In this section, you must discuss possible solutions.
A solution is only a solution if it:
Example:
If the students were allowed to take the laptops home, many respondents have stated that this will make them more responsible as a student. In this manner, students will be able to have the responsibility of taking care of the laptops and will, as a consequence, allow teachers to trust students more. Many respondents offered possible solutions to this problem. One respondent said that “Students could be allowed to take the laptops home for a trial period. At the end of the trial period, an assessment should be given. If the laptops are in good condition and it seems that students are being responsible, a decision could be made to allow students to take home the laptops on a more permanent basis.” This might prove as an efficient way to see if students are serious about this commitment.
According to Mr. Wright, a computer expert at I.S93, “We've already had a group go out of the building. Ms. Ochoa's class took some Apple computers home over the Christmas vacation as a sort of test, and it went really well.” This shows that it is, in fact, possible.
Writing the Closing
· State the problem
· Make sure you explain (again) what will happen if no action is taken (should be something bad)
· Explain the recommended course of action
· What will that action accomplish?
Example:
Since the students at I.S 93 are not allowed to take their laptops home, many are finding it difficult to complete school work and to stay up to date in their classes. Unless the school takes notice of this problem, the students’ grades will suffer, and, consequently, they might be held back for that year. The administration should give students a chance to prove themselves responsible enough to take the laptops home. This will improve the quality of their education dramatically.
This is the paragraph in which you explain the who, what, where, when, and why.
Section #2
This is the paragraph that you begin to discuss the results of your polls. I do not want you to explain them yet, however. Just tell me what the results are for the most important graphs. Be sure not to give both percentages, though. Only give the percentage that expresses the point of view that you wish to communicate.
Section #3
This is the paragraph that you begin to analyze the data. In the last paragraph you discussed the data, here you begin to interpret the data.
Section #4
Here, you begin to use the open-ended questions from your survey. Go through your surveys and find the most interesting/important comments. These comments should have something to do with a possible solution to your research problem.
Section #5
The closing: In this section you will recap your findings in a short, concise manner (don't forget the who, what, where, when, why and how).
Basically, you need to recap each paragraph in one sentence. Use the following list to help:
Here is an example of my polling report:
At Intermediate School 93 in Ridgewood, New York, students are in possession of a personal laptop. These laptops are considered their own while on school property; however, students are not allowed to take these laptops home. This is frustrating to some of the students because many believe that the laptops would have a greater benefit on their education if they were to be taken home.
I surveyed 100 students from grades 6,7, and 8 on the week of April 12th, 2007. Of those surveyed, 95% believe that students should be allowed to take their laptops home. Furthermore, the data shows that 98% of those surveyed say they would use the laptops to complete school work while at home. 78% say there was not enough time to finish class work and 56% say they have problems transferring files between their home/library and school. This result is important because even while 55% of students have a computer at home, if a student cannot access their school files, those computers are essentially worthless.
With that said, many students do not have a computer at home (45%), if students were allowed to take the laptops home, this would give them a means to complete their schoolwork. Likewise, if the students were allowed to take the laptops home, many say this will make them more responsible as a student (60%). In this manner, students will be able to have the responsibility of taking care of the laptops and will, as a consequence, allow teachers to trust students more.
Of the 100 people surveyed, many offered possible solutions to this problem. One respondent said that “Students could be allowed to take the laptops home for a trial period. At the end of the trial period, an assessment should be given. If the laptops are in good condition and it seems that students are being responsible, a decision could be made to allow students to take home the laptops on a more permanent basis.” This might prove as an efficient way to see of students are serious about this commitment.
Many believe that in not allowing students to take their laptops home, their academics are being adversely affected. 95% of the students surveyed feel that they should be allowed to take their laptops home. Likewise, most students believe that being allowed to take the laptops home will, in turn, make them more responsible. A possible solution to this problem is to give students their laptops on a trial basis. Give the students the chance to prove themselves.
Alongside the use of bar graphs and pie charts, you will be required to verbally explain the data. Here is a list of some information that will help you to do just that!
Features of a polling report:
Checklist:
A summary of the text which includes the conflict and enough infomration to demonstrate you understood what you have read. It should not give away the ending of the story.
A response to the text that answers one or more of the following:
For nonfiction, your response might include what made the text interesting. It could also include how the author put the information together that made it easy or difficult for you to understand.
A recommendation that tells who else should consider reading this book
In order to receive a grade of "Exceeds Expectations," you must include a quote or excerpt from the text. It might do one of the following:
ORAL PRESENTATION
When you come back from break, along with your reader response, you will be required to give an oral presentation on one of the following:
Draw or illustrate two or more of the following story elements:
· Main characters – choose any one or group of characters
· Settings
· An important event
· Parts of plot – beginning, climax, end
Design a poster that will advertise or “sell” your book
Using pictures from magazines, newspapers, etc., design a collage that represents an important aspect of your book
Write a poem about the book
Create and illustrate a timeline of your book
Q-2: What do you mean by "out-of-the-box?"
Q-3: What are some of the reasons that students cannot take home the laptops?
Q-4: Is there a possibility that sometime in the future laptops will be allowed to leave the building?
Q-5: Some laptops have left the building? I didn't know that. What would have to take place in order for more classes to have this privilege?
Q-6: Many students are unable to quickly complete their work for classes because their work is on their laptops. What suggestions can you give these students for completing their work more quickly?
Q-7: Are you saying that teachers should avoid assigning work that requires programs that students may not have at home?
Reading an interview is like eavesdropping though print, allowing us not only to hear the answers to a series of questions but to get a sense of a person as well. For this reason, interviews are one of the most popular forms of general reading. For writers, they hold yet another appeal: They provide easy access to lots of information.
Interview skills are research skills. In order to prepare for an interview, writers must explore a topic enough to establish their own credibility and identify the information needed. They must then identify useful information and formulate questions that will inspire them to reveal what they know.
Interview skills are formal conversation skills.
For young writers, interviews are opportunities to interact with people whom they might not normally meet and to explore a more formal use of oral language than conversations with peers.
In this part of the executive summary genre study, you will read interviews, look at the structures of questions, use your writing skills to draft a series of questions about your issue, review your note-taking skills, and transcribe the interview so that others learn more about community issues and people.
Some examples of popular culture interviews with:
How many people share the computer you use at home?
Check All That Apply Questions
If I could take my laptop home, I would use it to do assignments for the following classes (check all that apply):
ELA
Math
Social Studies
Science
Other
Scale Questions
How would you rate the school food? On a scale from 1 to 10, with 10 being great and 1 being awful, rank your answer.
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Rank Order Questions
If you were allowed to take your school laptop home, what would you spend the most time using it for? (Rank from 1-6, with six being the most time spent and one being the least time spent)
___To practice typing
___To research school material
___To complete schoolwork
___To communicate with teachers and students about school-related work
___To communicate about work unrelated to school
___To communicate
Why do you need to take your laptop home? (Rank from 1-5, with five being the most important reason and one being the least important reason)
___My home does not have a computer
___The computer(s) I have at home is/are not always accessible to me
___My computer cannot connect to the Internet
___My home computer does not have the software I need for school
___I want to continue working on my classwork while at home
Rank from 1-7 the following reasons students aren't allowed to take laptops home, with 7 being the most the most legitimate reason and 1 being the least legitimate reason.
___The laptops will be lost.
___The laptops will be broken.
___The laptops will be stolen.
___Students will be attacked for their laptops.
___Students will forget to bring their laptops back.
___Students will forget to charge their laptops at home.
___Students will use their laptops improperly.
Open-Ended Questions
Open-ended questions do not give the respondent the option of picking a choice. They need to answer the question themselves
Why do you think the school has not yet allowed students to bring their laptops home?
What would the laptop mainly be used for at home?
Explain how taking your laptop home will affect your school performance.
Throughout the course of this book, we have learned that rock and roll is more than just music and we have seen how it has shaped the American culture. When Ed Rickenbacker invented the electric guitar, little did he know how important his invention would become. From that moment on, rock and roll took a new turn. Where will rock and roll go next?
As you continue to write your children’s nonfiction book, you will undoubtedly come across some difficult words. That will be your first clue. If they are difficult for you, they will most certainly be difficult for your audience. You need to help your reader understand your book through definitions. There are a few different ways to do this, one of them, is to create a glossary.
A glossary (located in the back of your book) is a place where a reader can go to find the definitions of difficult words. While creating a glossary, keep in mind the following:
Glossary
The introduction is a small but crucial part of any piece of writing. Your reader needs the introduction to understand your article and to connect with you, the author. If the introduction is left out, the whole piece of writing lacks structure and usually doesn't make sense.
Graphics:
Illustrations
Photographs
Diagrams
Maps
Tables
Charts
graphs
Fonts and special effects:
Titles
Headings
Boldface print
Color print
Italics
Bullets
Captions
Structure:
Table of contents
Introduction
Preface
Index
Glossary
Appendix
Epilogue
Signal words:
For example
For instance
In fact
In conclusion
Most important
But
Therefore
On the other hand
Such as
Here is a link that will help you practice for the listening portion of the ELA exam. We have talked about 2 different ways to take notes during this portion, find the way which works best for you.
Strategy #1: organize the information into topics and details.
Strategy #2: Draw a line for missed information, that way you can remember what you forgot during the second reading.
Click here for Listening Prep!
*Don't forget to try the multiple choice section to see how well you did with your note taking.
Whichever way you choose, the more you practice now, the better your chance come test day.